Very good for informing us
But very simple a basic
WWW: There was good punctuation and there was no mistakes EBI: There was nothing to improve
I like how you added something kind say have a good day. An even better if would be to write a bit more such as description.
I liked how you said that everything will be great for our class.
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I liked your questions but you could write more and add pictures but it was good
WWW:It was very interesting and gave me a lot of information about life.
WWW: I like the questions you ask the people questions. EBI: Give examples like When did you read, At 12:00 for example
I love the message you have written to you class but i would put more information just to confirm everything.
Brilliant blog miss Shanahan!! your a pro…. Have a good day miss xx
I really like how you wanted the year 5s to do the best and you guided us by the lesson
want went well is lots of information ebi;none
www: I like how you wrote it and how you said a rhetorical question in it, i love it 🙂 EBI: the are none
WWW. I like that you said have a good day which can brighten up some ones day and feels like you’re talking to you. EBI. I think you can add more sentences a bit but still very good!
www: Amazing instructions miss and a lot of information. EBI: You can add more instructions and pictures
WOW its so cool
www-its a very kind welcoming gift to everyone ebi-you can add more pictures and caption
PS:its amazing
Nice words i dont know what else to say……….
what went well was that, your title said hi year five and that is very suitable for what you wrote. ebi you could have added more information
WWW: You were interactive with us.
EBI: It was a bit longer.
My day has been good.
What went well was that u wrote who u were sending it to so we know who its for exactly and i also love the questions nice and have a nice dayy.
WWW: Very good punctuation EBI: But you could add more writing.
you added more detail in the writing other then that i like it have a god day to(;
Great job…….this helped me understand the secret of life:D
WWW: You made us know that it is working thank you. YOU ARE THE BEST TEACHER I KNOW !
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Very good for informing us
But very simple a basic
WWW: There was good punctuation and there was no mistakes
EBI: There was nothing to improve
WWW: There was good punctuation and there was no mistakes
EBI: There was nothing to improve
I like how you added something kind say have a good day.
An even better if would be to write a bit more such as description.
I liked how you said that everything will be great for our class.
and*
I liked your questions but you could write more and add pictures but it was good
WWW:It was very interesting and gave me a lot of information about life.
WWW: I like the questions you ask the people questions.
EBI: Give examples like When did you read, At 12:00 for example
I love the message you have written to you class but i would put more information just to confirm everything.
Brilliant blog miss Shanahan!! your a pro…. Have a good day miss xx
I really like how you wanted the year 5s to do the best and you guided us by the lesson
want went well is lots of information ebi;none
www: I like how you wrote it and how you said a rhetorical question in it, i love it 🙂
EBI: the are none
want went well is lots of information ebi;none
WWW. I like that you said have a good day which can brighten up some ones day and feels like you’re talking to you.
EBI. I think you can add more sentences a bit but still very good!
www: Amazing instructions miss and a lot of information. EBI: You can add more instructions and pictures
WOW its so cool
www-its a very kind welcoming gift to everyone
ebi-you can add more pictures and caption
PS:its amazing
Nice words i dont know what else to say……….
what went well was that, your title said hi year five and that is very suitable for what you wrote. ebi you could have added more information
WWW: You were interactive with us.
EBI: It was a bit longer.
My day has been good.
What went well was that u wrote who u were sending it to so we know who its for exactly and i also love the questions nice and have a nice dayy.
WWW: Very good punctuation
EBI: But you could add more writing.
you added more detail in the writing other then that i like it have a god day to(;
want went well is lots of information ebi;none
Great job…….this helped me understand the secret of life:D
WWW: You made us know that it is working thank you.
YOU ARE THE BEST TEACHER I KNOW !