WWW: I like you made this blog about like save the animals and so peoples voices should be heard
EBI: Some spellings are wrong but amazing blog overall!!!
www: yo explained very much about the endangered animals and hw its caused and how we could stop it.
EBI: you could check your punctuation and up-level some words. 🙂
WWW: Interesting information about endangered animals
EBI: Check
Your capital letters
I like how you wrote about pandas, but I didn’t understand 1 of the sentences. Except for that I really liked it
WWW=I liked your description
EBI= Maybe you can add more details and description and photos.
I love the message you are trying to create to concern the world about this problem. Just add more info to tell people about your topic.
WWW: very nice information about pandas
EBI: Please check the spelling
WWW: I like you made this blog about like save the animals and so peoples voices should be heard
EBI: Some spellings are wrong but amazing blog overall!!!
WWW: I like the detail and attention you have put into your work
EBI: Please check your CL
www: yo explained very much about the endangered animals and hw its caused and how we could stop it.
EBI: you could check your punctuation and up-level some words. 🙂
W.W.W=I liked how you wrote lots of information about endangered animals
E.B.I=You checked your spellings!
Now I know more about pandas but add a bit more infomation
it was really good now i know more about endangerd animals but add abit more info